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		<description><![CDATA[Ain&#039;t blogging grand?  cj, I&#039;m honored and flattered that my thoughts could help to inspire you, and in ways that affect your plotting, too!  How cool is that?  I so agree that nothing is ever black or white, and the best we can do--and I mean the word &quot;best&quot; in the best possible way, here--is to trust that instinct you mentioned.  I&#039;ve read your intro. for SHARDS, and it seems there are some moral choices going on there--always sticky, at best.
I&#039;m enamored with paragraph 7, above, regarding things needing to feel natural.  That&#039;s a brilliant word to use, in my opinion, one I didn&#039;t think of during my exploration.
I believe if you can convey that--naturalness of thought and action--in your writing (and I&#039;m sure you can!) the reader will be entranced and care about the characters.  Although I don&#039;t know much of the plot of Shards, yet, you&#039;ve got me wondering what moral dilemmas I will face as a reader.
Regarding &quot;all three of your readers&quot;:  While I have fewer than many blogs do as well, I like to think that what they lack in quantity they make up for with quality.  I hope you can see your readers that way too, especially given I&#039;m one of &#039;em. :) Cheers, and many thanks for this!

&lt;strong&gt;CJ: Hey Muse, it should be the other way round really; without your post, I&#039;d still be stuck staring at a blank page, so my gratitude knows no bounds! :)

I just think it&#039;s so simple to look at something and categorise it as being one thing or the other, but it&#039;s never that simple. The more we define something as black or white, right or wrong, the easier it is to make the jump to something being immoral, or someone else being &quot;lesser&quot;. It&#039;s something the media loves to do; you&#039;re either for or against the war, liberal or conservative, but in the end doesn&#039;t our need to put something in a neat box just show how narrow &lt;em&gt;our&lt;/em&gt; point of view is?

I know I consider myself none of those things; I just try to be true to my instincts, and to do what feels natural in a situation. It&#039;s worked so far. ;) There are a few moral choices in &lt;em&gt;Shards&lt;/em&gt;, but really what I&#039;ve struggled with is making those choices seem like they&#039;re something people might really make in dire circumstances. But I don&#039;t think that&#039;s what I have to do now; it&#039;s not about justifying it as much as making it feel like an extension of their choices. In turn (I hope!) that should make them more real.

The crux of the story is just how far would you go if everything around you - your family, your life, your society - was threatened? Faced with something new that could destroy your way of life, is there a point you&#039;d cross in protecting yourself that means you&#039;d stop being human? And would you willingly cross it? That point is different for everyone, but I&#039;d like to think I wouldn&#039;t; there are some things that are just too important to lose.

Hehe, well I do have a few more readers than that! :) I have some very loyal readers of my blog and my stats are usually good; I meant more that I have a few less readers with my fiction. It&#039;s been a while since I finished anything, so I need to rebuild my audience. I actually started &lt;em&gt;Shards&lt;/em&gt; because an agent asked if I had anything to show them; I&#039;m not sure I would show it to them now, but it&#039;s definitely the novel I needed to write to know that I could. And I hope once I get these last few details ironed out that it&#039;ll be a good read. ;)

And blogging is indeed grand; I mean, where else could I bore people to death with the little details of a writer&#039;s life? :lol:&lt;/strong&gt;]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ain&#8217;t blogging grand?  cj, I&#8217;m honored and flattered that my thoughts could help to inspire you, and in ways that affect your plotting, too!  How cool is that?  I so agree that nothing is ever black or white, and the best we can do&#8211;and I mean the word &#8220;best&#8221; in the best possible way, here&#8211;is to trust that instinct you mentioned.  I&#8217;ve read your intro. for SHARDS, and it seems there are some moral choices going on there&#8211;always sticky, at best.<br />
I&#8217;m enamored with paragraph 7, above, regarding things needing to feel natural.  That&#8217;s a brilliant word to use, in my opinion, one I didn&#8217;t think of during my exploration.<br />
I believe if you can convey that&#8211;naturalness of thought and action&#8211;in your writing (and I&#8217;m sure you can!) the reader will be entranced and care about the characters.  Although I don&#8217;t know much of the plot of Shards, yet, you&#8217;ve got me wondering what moral dilemmas I will face as a reader.<br />
Regarding &#8220;all three of your readers&#8221;:  While I have fewer than many blogs do as well, I like to think that what they lack in quantity they make up for with quality.  I hope you can see your readers that way too, especially given I&#8217;m one of &#8216;em. <img src='http://s0.wp.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />  Cheers, and many thanks for this!</p>
<p><strong>CJ: Hey Muse, it should be the other way round really; without your post, I&#8217;d still be stuck staring at a blank page, so my gratitude knows no bounds! <img src='http://s0.wp.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>I just think it&#8217;s so simple to look at something and categorise it as being one thing or the other, but it&#8217;s never that simple. The more we define something as black or white, right or wrong, the easier it is to make the jump to something being immoral, or someone else being &#8220;lesser&#8221;. It&#8217;s something the media loves to do; you&#8217;re either for or against the war, liberal or conservative, but in the end doesn&#8217;t our need to put something in a neat box just show how narrow <em>our</em> point of view is?</p>
<p>I know I consider myself none of those things; I just try to be true to my instincts, and to do what feels natural in a situation. It&#8217;s worked so far. <img src='http://s1.wp.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';)' class='wp-smiley' />  There are a few moral choices in <em>Shards</em>, but really what I&#8217;ve struggled with is making those choices seem like they&#8217;re something people might really make in dire circumstances. But I don&#8217;t think that&#8217;s what I have to do now; it&#8217;s not about justifying it as much as making it feel like an extension of their choices. In turn (I hope!) that should make them more real.</p>
<p>The crux of the story is just how far would you go if everything around you &#8211; your family, your life, your society &#8211; was threatened? Faced with something new that could destroy your way of life, is there a point you&#8217;d cross in protecting yourself that means you&#8217;d stop being human? And would you willingly cross it? That point is different for everyone, but I&#8217;d like to think I wouldn&#8217;t; there are some things that are just too important to lose.</p>
<p>Hehe, well I do have a few more readers than that! <img src='http://s0.wp.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />  I have some very loyal readers of my blog and my stats are usually good; I meant more that I have a few less readers with my fiction. It&#8217;s been a while since I finished anything, so I need to rebuild my audience. I actually started <em>Shards</em> because an agent asked if I had anything to show them; I&#8217;m not sure I would show it to them now, but it&#8217;s definitely the novel I needed to write to know that I could. And I hope once I get these last few details ironed out that it&#8217;ll be a good read. <img src='http://s1.wp.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>And blogging is indeed grand; I mean, where else could I bore people to death with the little details of a writer&#8217;s life? <img src='http://s2.wp.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_lol.gif' alt=':lol:' class='wp-smiley' /> </strong></p>
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